Her first thought, being of the dog's well-being, was a great touch. This chapter was slower than the last two, which feels purposeful. A breath for a moment in the reunion. The added mystery was done well here. How's that guy? The rose? loved the breadcrumbs.
This is so good. ❤️
Thank you so much!
Oh puppy. So happy. You expressed that so well.
Her first thought, being of the dog's well-being, was a great touch. This chapter was slower than the last two, which feels purposeful. A breath for a moment in the reunion. The added mystery was done well here. How's that guy? The rose? loved the breadcrumbs.
My favorite chapter so far - and I like the others, too.