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Fiona Bridges's avatar

This is so weird and beautiful. You truly have something here with this story. Thank you for writing it.

Mat the Horror Poet's avatar

Felt very ethereal. A little funny. Still hooked. "Define ghost" was such a great punch, and now I'm even more curious.

IanD.M.Taniels|Writer&Curator's avatar

Cool chapter. Nice flow, pace and just that little magical touch (I mean in your writing) that makes it special.

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

This was great. I get distracted by the dog, I’ve never had one but I do love animals. The banana phone was a nice touch.