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Jacqueline Billy's avatar

Love this heartfelt story. So natural, and easy with a little tension and curiosity about the unread note. I loved it!

Fiona Bridges's avatar

I agree with Mat below. Best chapter yet. He sounds wise.

Mat the Horror Poet's avatar

Excellent job making Paul genuinely likable in this chapter. I enjoyed the banter, the unsaid strength, and trauma. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Really enjoyed seeing the relationship between the two.

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

Start with now. That’s the only place you can’t start from. Great read.