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Jacqueline Billy's avatar

Love this heartfelt story. So natural, and easy with a little tension and curiosity about the unread note. I loved it!

Fiona Bridges's avatar

I agree with Mat below. Best chapter yet. He sounds wise.

Mat the Horror Poet's avatar

Excellent job making Paul genuinely likable in this chapter. I enjoyed the banter, the unsaid strength, and trauma. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Really enjoyed seeing the relationship between the two.