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Ted Bingham: From the Jam Cave's avatar

I love stories where death isn't written as a tragedy. Not like glorifying death, but like tir story here, a peaceful end of a live centered on love.

Kayleigh Thorpe's avatar

OH WOW, Just saw this (thanks substack) What a haunting piece. LOVE THIS. Really well done!

Dino's avatar

Interesting prompt. It definitely makes you stop and think about what memories would come to your own mind first.

tsunimee's avatar

What a piece. The mother's hands, Zee as a puppy, the calm water beside the ferry. You fit a whole life in there and I felt every second of it. 🎇