To actually answer the question that was asked unless I missed something no I don't htink the Dawn part was appalling in fact I loved the whole scenario.....and keep in mind even if someone does find something out of place it was a dream and dreams are what they are.
yes thank you so much Cailin. I agree i think it being a dream softens it just enough. it says elsewhere in the book how bad i felt when dawn lost her sister, and that made it so much worse when she turned on me. so the reader will know her sister is dead when they read it. does that make it land any differently for you?
Good. Who needs a calf?
To actually answer the question that was asked unless I missed something no I don't htink the Dawn part was appalling in fact I loved the whole scenario.....and keep in mind even if someone does find something out of place it was a dream and dreams are what they are.
yes thank you so much Cailin. I agree i think it being a dream softens it just enough. it says elsewhere in the book how bad i felt when dawn lost her sister, and that made it so much worse when she turned on me. so the reader will know her sister is dead when they read it. does that make it land any differently for you?
not at all....again still a dream you can't be responsible for how you feel in a dream
Karma wrapped up in bow. Hopefully a vision 😂
This dream is the ultimate fantasy! Finally, some justice and accountability. Artie’s faceplant is the cherry on top. 😂
it never gets old picturing Artie getting his !! 😆
Interesting
It's kind of like a 20's detective serial. It's a good movie.
Kind of reminded of the movie Sin City, which I loved 😁
I never saw that, maybe I need to watch it!!!