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Mathew C. Bryant's avatar

I'm hooked. Perfect balance for the previous chapter. It felt grounded and deeply emotional. You can feel the love she has for her sister, and I'm curious about the "Same story over and over." Very good.

Ian DM Taniels's avatar

Intriguing second chapter. Looking forward to reading more!

Notes from the Hill's avatar

So glad you liked ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜Š