This chapter is quietly devastating. The way the burial plot is presented so casual, so transactional makes the emotional weight land even harder. I really felt the sense of inherited silence and unnamed grief, especially in the line about being āformally invited to lie down next to a mother she couldnāt remember.ā The ending lingers in that aching space between memory and absence. Beautifully written, and unsettling in the most human way.
You never know unless you call.
True.
This ending was breathtaking
Thank you ā Iām really glad it came through.
This chapter is quietly devastating. The way the burial plot is presented so casual, so transactional makes the emotional weight land even harder. I really felt the sense of inherited silence and unnamed grief, especially in the line about being āformally invited to lie down next to a mother she couldnāt remember.ā The ending lingers in that aching space between memory and absence. Beautifully written, and unsettling in the most human way.
Thank you. You really understood what I was trying to do there.
Awe the goodbye disguised as a gift, subtle and somber.
Thank you. That's exactly how it felt writing!
This is beautifully written ā¤ļø
Thank you ā¤ļø
Holding for comment.
Like the development! Iāll circle back to the others!
Thank you so much!!!